Low Laying fruits

 

1. Save – a -Lot:   Patent Registration # 60 / 165,637 &62 / 495,807
   
    

 

1.  Please make the Title’s font little bigger, underline & add Patent Pending number to next to it as shown above

2. (3rd line )..at the end of business remove “ ; “ sign.  Bring the 4th line up to complete the sentence

3. ..after the word inexpensive ( add )  3 Kind of loose sugars, like Regular, Splenda and brown sugar

4. …before no repeated…add   It dispenses 3 kind of refrigerated milks ( regular, low fat , half & half ) just insert ….

5. The sentence before last one in this para (add)  FOR  ENTREPENEURS:  If leased ……

6. ..at the end ( add )….Entrepreneur’s net profit over 30 months = 30 X 140 = $2,200.00.  Initial investment $450.00

 

1.  Medical …..
    

e-Bra:  Patent Registration # 61 / 342,594

1.  Replace the word which with when

2. …after nodes.   Then it will be too late

 

Electronic Ovulation Monitor.   Patent #5 – 209 – 238
 

a)….in 2nd sentence: after unwanted replace the word baby with pregnancy

b)  2nd Line:….our Patented

c)  4th line:…about to be

d) add “ Download links “

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